I'm actually supposed to be doing homework now but... *clears throat*.
You are incredibly talented. You seem to be an expert with clay and crafts
You have "decorated" the cake nicely and the TLS (or whatever it is, sorry I'm not an expert!) was a very nice touch for the icing of the cake. It makes it look more realistic and yummy! The sprinkles are very well made, imagining how small they are and how frustrating it is to produce such miniature pieces. You have textured it very neatly and it just looks so realistic... I also love how you have made the white rose on top of the vanilla cake. It's so detailed and perfect that it just brings the finished product together. I love how you vary the icing of the cake from marzipan style to soft and creamy icing (rainbow cake).

I actually have no dislikes for this. I just love it so much that I honestly can't spot any flaws
Well done! Keep it up!